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Elements RS Prologue Pg-1 by Hyena27 Elements RS Prologue Pg-1 by Hyena27
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YAY! Here it is, the first page of Elements: Rising Storm(Rising storm is temporary unless I come up with no other ideas). So please tell me what you think of the page and the title.
This is the first page of the prologue that explains the Elementals and Amaleeve. If you read Elements ANB, the first 3 pages won't be new to you. I hope you enjoy the page, and the comic;)
So here we have Ayva, Goddess of Life, and Thane, God of Death. Then there's Devin, Goddess of Elements.

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:iconearthpatriot117:
Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
what's comic about?
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the comic is about a young dragon named Shard and his fight to protect his clan from the wrath of an envious god
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:iconcarleysap:
CarleySap Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Compared to the older comic pages, these are put together very very nicely UuU They're a lot more organized.
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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:iconspider123357:
spider123357 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Writer
the page is beautiful and i hope you continue
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! Page 3 will be uploaded tonight!
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:iconrespeanut:
Respeanut Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Well, I think it's good that you fixed the extremely narrow styled eyes from the previous comics.

The font choice is not bad, but it is pretty bold and is kind of fighting with the illustrations, I suggest to experiment more on the typography.

It's interesting to see a comic done with markers. I'd like to see using the medium at it's potential: Markers can be fantastic for lineart, try to vary the weight of the lines, especially with those edgy scales and feathers. Continue to further fixing the anatomy as well cause that needs the most work in your case.
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. yeah those eyes were creepy and too unrealistic.

Oh I see, I'll try using the non-bold for the next page and see how that looks.

Markers are fun:) I'm still learning how to use them so I hope to improve as time goes on. Ok^^ There's always room for improvements. Thanks for your help
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:iconrespeanut:
Respeanut Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
No problem :)
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconshaubetcha:
Shaubetcha Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Coolness. Reminds me of the story of raven and the northwestern native american mythology.
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I've never read the story
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:iconeternaldragonqueen:
Eternaldragonqueen Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But when they were introduced.... WHEN THEY WERE INTRODUCED WHAT?! *shakes you vigorously* WHAT?! WHAT??!!!! WHAT HAPPENS?! :D
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LolXD don't worry you will find out soon! I just need to edit the page and I should upload it tonight
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:iconhappyhorseshoe303:
happyhorseshoe303 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
this looks really good! it's kind of funny in color, 'cuz i'm so used to it in b/w with just the eyes in color!
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! It's for fun to draw and color:)
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:iconhappyhorseshoe303:
happyhorseshoe303 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
color is generally fun.
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it is^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is fantastic!

You've made a fantastic job with the comic revamp :) It looks so clear now! And Devin looks gorgeous, I love her <3 I can't wait for more! :D
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks:) yeah! I like it better in color. It's more fun too:3 Thanks!<3
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same! <3 Your comic is epic! :D

Aww no probs^^
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No probs :)
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:iconhorncartoons:
HornCartoons Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your art has improved a lot since the beginning.
The title seems fine to me, it adds a bit of suspense, making myself wonder what might happen next. Nice work.
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I like the title. The only thing is its also the title of a warrior cats book. Idk of people care though. Thanks again:)
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:iconhorncartoons:
HornCartoons Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconsander94:
sander94 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
for now its looking good XD cant agree on you saying its usseless C:
tell me more and i could assist you with idea's XD
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks:D Ok thank you. I think the title has grown on me, it seemed to warrior-catish but I dont know *shrugs*
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:iconsander94:
sander94 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
all by all, i as an "outsider" would say the title is fine, its clear, directly to the point but still gives room to let the reader run his own imagination around it~

ah chill~ its good XD cant wait to see more of it
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
btw I lostXD lol love your signature
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:iconsander94:
sander94 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
LOL its all about the fun in tha game XD
(IKR, copy it, rule DA with it C:)
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you:)
I should have more posted next week!
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:iconowlknightofthefey:
OwlknightOfTheFey Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob, but seriously about the books, how do u think i got as good as i am? (take a look at my pic "Elements of Life" please add constructive critisism)
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok:) Sure
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:iconowlknightofthefey:
OwlknightOfTheFey Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
art could use a bit of work ( i would suggest going to ur local library and getting everything u can on wolves, dragonlore etc.) but storyline is great
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks^^
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:iconowlknightofthefey:
OwlknightOfTheFey Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconowlknightofthefey:
OwlknightOfTheFey Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehehehehehe i write too, don't have anything here it's all on google docs
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool:)
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:iconowlknightofthefey:
OwlknightOfTheFey Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah if u have an account i'll share 'em to ya
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't sorry:/
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:iconpicklesquidly:
Picklesquidly Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ONGOMGOMG FIRST PAGE *squeals*
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD I take it your excited:3
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:iconpicklesquidly:
Picklesquidly Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD

Im gonna go make some fanart 030
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you<3 I'll have to put it on the website!
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:iconpicklesquidly:
Picklesquidly Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D

can I have the link to the website? :3
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:iconhyena27:
Hyena27 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sure:3
[link]
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