YAY! Here it is, the first page of Elements: Rising Storm(Rising storm is temporary unless I come up with no other ideas). So please tell me what you think of the page and the title. This is the first page of the prologue that explains the Elementals and Amaleeve. If you read Elements ANB, the first 3 pages won't be new to you. I hope you enjoy the page, and the comic So here we have Ayva, Goddess of Life, and Thane, God of Death. Then there's Devin, Goddess of Elements.
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Well, I think it's good that you fixed the extremely narrow styled eyes from the previous comics.
The font choice is not bad, but it is pretty bold and is kind of fighting with the illustrations, I suggest to experiment more on the typography.
It's interesting to see a comic done with markers. I'd like to see using the medium at it's potential: Markers can be fantastic for lineart, try to vary the weight of the lines, especially with those edgy scales and feathers. Continue to further fixing the anatomy as well cause that needs the most work in your case.
Thanks. yeah those eyes were creepy and too unrealistic.
Oh I see, I'll try using the non-bold for the next page and see how that looks.
Markers are fun I'm still learning how to use them so I hope to improve as time goes on. Ok^^ There's always room for improvements. Thanks for your help
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