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I really like the way you set this up, the dragon in the first panel looks strong but like he's going to die, it really makes for a sad but inspiring impact, the second panel shows originaility in the way you used what he was saying in the background, however although I love the detail in the scales there are some times where that could be confusing to the viewer, so perhaps if you found a way to dull down the scales a tad it would leave more attention to the eyes and what they're saying instead of drawing it all into to detail of the scales.
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